2020年pets1写作范文（14）

根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，要求条理清楚，文理通顺，意思连贯。

近年来，传染性疾病不断发生，威胁人类的健康。为了使自己少受疾病的危害，日常生活中我们应该怎么办?应注意哪些问题?请你就这一问题，给《学生英文报》写一篇80词左右的征文，谈谈自己的想法。要点如下：

1.疾病对人们生活的影响;

2.在家、在学校等公共场所应该注意哪些问题;

3.日常生活中应该如何养成良好的生活习惯和卫生习惯。

参考词汇：infectious disease 传染性疾病 infect 传染

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In recent years, there are many infectious diseases that spread in the world. They are threatening the health of humankind. These diseases bring about a lot of troubles in our daily lives. Above all, they make people live in the fear.

However, we can do something to prevent infectious diseases. we shoul davoid of sharing personal things with others, when we are at home or in the public like schools.Besides, we should form a good living habit, In other words, we should live regularly and keep doing exercises. And we should wash our hands frequently and take a bath every day.

权威解读

文章表达清晰明了，结构完整，语句通顺，能够运用定语从句that spread...和whichmeans...连贯地表达出作者的意图。however，besides很好地承接了上下文，使文章层次清楚，段落之间衔接自然。此外，小作者书写自如，初中生能写出如此好的英文实在难能可贵，为文章增色不少。考生如果怕自己错过考试报名时间和考试时间的话，可以 免费预约短信提醒，届时会以短信的方式提醒大家报名和考试时间。

好词佳句

1.threaten 威胁

2.bring about 带来

3.live in the fear 生活在恐惧中4.in other words 换句话说

5.And we also need to keep personal hygiene, which means that we should

wash our hands frequently and take a bath every day. 而且我们应该保持个人卫生习惯，也就是说我们应该经常洗手，天天洗澡。

点拨：准确恰当地运用了which引导的非限性定语从句，以一个很出彩的句子给整篇文章画上了圆满的句号。

6.However, we can do something to prevent infectious diseases. 然而，我们可以做一些事情来预防传染性疾病。

点拨：However把话锋一转，为下文的展开做了铺垫。

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