预约成功
六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此,某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为《如何保护眼睛》的征文稿,内容要点包括:
1.眼睛的重要性;
2.保护眼睛的措施:
(1)不要长时间看书报;
(2)不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书;
(3)坚持做眼保健操;
……
注意:
词数:80—100。不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥。
How to Protect Our Eyes
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How to Protect Our Eyes
Eyes are so important that people think of them as the windows of the heart. Without them we will be in the dark. Thus, how to protect our eyes is what we should think about. There are some measures that we can take. For example, if we read for a long time, we should stop to take a rest; if the light is too strong or too weak, reading will do harm to our eyes; it is a good idea to keep doing eye exercises; it is a bad habit to read while walking.
If we keep the above in mind, we'll have healthy eyes.考生如果怕自己错过考试报名时间和考试时间的话,可以 免费预约短信提醒,届时会以短信的方式提醒大家报名和考试时间。
权威解读
本文语句通顺,内容突出,语言简洁明了,要点齐全。作者紧扣题目要求,并且增加了一些细节。结构清晰,安排比较合理,出色地完成了写作任务。漂亮的书写也为本文增彩不少。that we can take...定语从句,it is a good idea...句式,it is a bad habit...句式等,是本文尤其出彩的地方。
好词佳句
1.take a rest 休息一会儿
2.do harm to 对……有害
3.keep doing sth. 坚持做某事
4.Eyes are so important that people think of them as the windows of the heart.睛如此重要以至于人们把它们比作心灵的窗户。
点拨:开篇点明眼睛的重要性,为下文的描述作了很好地铺垫,so... that...语法结构运用地很好。
5.For example, if we read for long time, we should stop to take a rest. 例如,如果我们读了很长时间的书,我们应该停下来休息一会儿。
点拨:if引导的条件状语从句,很好地解释了小作者保护眼睛的第一个方法。
参考样文
How to Protect Our Eyes
Eye is the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It's not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You'd better not read in a strong or poor light. Don't read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye-exercises every day. What's more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It's time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
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